Thank you, Miles. That means a lot. I went a few directions as I was writing it before settling with this version. I feel good about it. It captures my mom’s final years, but really could be anyone who becomes debilitated and loses contact with their old life. Thank you.
Thank you, Stephanie. It’s based on my mom, who finally was able to find peace after losing all her special people, her vision and her mobility. I appreciate your kind words.
A third-person life through the lens of a camera.. great poem! Thanks for sharing, I wish you a beautiful Saturday!
Thank you! I really liked this one, too. Appreciate your comment very much!
This was very elusive, but quite enamoring to decipher. Wonderful piece!
Thank you, Miles. That means a lot. I went a few directions as I was writing it before settling with this version. I feel good about it. It captures my mom’s final years, but really could be anyone who becomes debilitated and loses contact with their old life. Thank you.
Huge thanks for the sharing of experience, made me recollect my own losses too
We all have them, it really does help to share, doesn’t it?
This poem is so moving. I could feel the isolation and the loss. You express the feelings well. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you, Stephanie. It’s based on my mom, who finally was able to find peace after losing all her special people, her vision and her mobility. I appreciate your kind words.
You’ve captured the feelings so well. Thanks for sharing this part of your life.